Sat, Feb 24, 2007

Kaze no Uta (Wind Song)

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Winds howl down the heights:
Snow vanishes, ice bonds fade,
Frozen sleepers wake.
Chinook frees imprisoned lands,
Shaping mud back to the world.

[The classic Japanese poetic form is the tanka: 5 7 5 7 7, not the shorter haiku that was more recently derived from it.]

Posted at: 7:09 pm MST

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Re: Kaze no Uta (Wind Song)
R.K.Singhwrote on Mon, 26 Feb 2007 02:57

Hi, I enjoyed reading your haiku. It's always a wonderful experience to read the poems in ancient Japanese form. I too have been practising haiku and tanka and would like friends to visit my blogs:

http://rksingh.blogspot.com http://profrksingh.blogspot.com

and share their comments on the effectiveness of my poems. All the best' R.K. Singh

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